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theresa may/philip may fanfiction reviews

some of these are like 50,000+ words (what the fuck???) so i only read the first chapter. links included. will be done 10 fics at a time.

first installment 6/8/18

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-very long, so only read the first chapter.

-in all italics

-gives theresa may emotions, so obviously ooc

-very dramatic and gripping

-luckily no vivid sex scene, but sex was alluded to so sickening.

-6/10

x

-good grammar

-nice character study

-weird time skip in the middle

-cheesy

-7.5/10

x

-first person

-dodgy grammar

-rambly

-0 action

-3/10

x

-has may as a young woman, so inaccurate; everyone knows may came out of the robot factory at 40.

-nice pacing and grammar.

-interesting story.

-8.5/10

x

-children au – bit insensitive considering she’s always wanted children and can’t have them.

-too much speech.

-good grammar.

-alluded to sex scene.

-7/10

x

-good grammar.

-bad speech.

-opening para’s a bit my immortal.

-again – bit insenstive on the baby front.

-awful cliffhanger ending.

-5/10

x

-paints may as miss honey when she’s obviously miss trunchball.

-well written, nice grammar and speech.

-enjoyable story.

-7/10

x

-italic thoughts

-too much description

-philip nuzzling her neck and calling her princess made me need a tetanus shot

-sex scene. grim.

-gripping story.

-7/10

x

-awful characterisation.

-badly written tbh.

-sex scene. philip tells theresa she’s so tight. yes you read that right.

-2/10

x

-very soppy.

-almost made me symphathetic to may then i remembered i hate her.

-good grammar.

-nice inner monologuing.

-lackluster ending.

-6/10

to be continued.